Wednesday, 30 May 2018

Blog Profile

we were learning about what we can share and what we keep private.

8 comments:

  1. cute very very cute and I like your prrofile

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  2. hi Jesse. my name is Aaron. nice work youv got. It is sad that youer cat died. I want a cat but mum is alergec and we do not have the money.

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  3. your back is awsome and cute so is the gold fish

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  4. hope you have luck wiht your gold fishy

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  5. hope you have good luck with bying cats and feeding it
    note beware the cat mighht be hungry and want a snack(the fish)

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  6. kia ora Jesse its me Harlem I liked how you did you're mahi I how you explained what you love maybe next time you could try to put more punctuation and proofread to cheek for mistakes
    noho ora mai

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  7. like your slide especially your background. I also like the part where you added the cats.

    Next time you should make your pictures smaller so you could add more pictures.

    Question why did you decided to do your animation about cats?

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