Welcome to my blog, I'm a student at Paroa School in Greymouth, New Zealand.
cute very very cute and I like your prrofile
hi Jesse. my name is Aaron. nice work youv got. It is sad that youer cat died. I want a cat but mum is alergec and we do not have the money.
your back is awsome and cute so is the gold fish
hope you have luck wiht your gold fishy
hope you have good luck with bying cats and feeding itnote beware the cat mighht be hungry and want a snack(the fish)
hi Aaron thanks for it
kia ora Jesse its me Harlem I liked how you did you're mahi I how you explained what you love maybe next time you could try to put more punctuation and proofread to cheek for mistakesnoho ora mai
like your slide especially your background. I also like the part where you added the cats.Next time you should make your pictures smaller so you could add more pictures.Question why did you decided to do your animation about cats?Blog post 8/11/2018 My holiday writing.
Thank you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comments.
cute very very cute and I like your prrofile
ReplyDeletehi Jesse. my name is Aaron. nice work youv got. It is sad that youer cat died. I want a cat but mum is alergec and we do not have the money.
ReplyDeleteyour back is awsome and cute so is the gold fish
ReplyDeletehope you have luck wiht your gold fishy
ReplyDeletehope you have good luck with bying cats and feeding it
ReplyDeletenote beware the cat mighht be hungry and want a snack(the fish)
hi Aaron thanks for it
Deletekia ora Jesse its me Harlem I liked how you did you're mahi I how you explained what you love maybe next time you could try to put more punctuation and proofread to cheek for mistakes
ReplyDeletenoho ora mai
like your slide especially your background. I also like the part where you added the cats.
ReplyDeleteNext time you should make your pictures smaller so you could add more pictures.
Question why did you decided to do your animation about cats?
Blog post 8/11/2018 My holiday writing.