WALT Use descriptive language

I went to Nelson. It felt like I was in a desert it was so hot. An hour later I saw the sea it was like sparkling water It looked like it. Then I felt a ray of a sunbeam on my face and body. I had some fish and chips that tasted so nice. The blue sparkling waters the waves crashing down on the beach when I walked back the birds started chirping and I went back to the cabin after a long day