Thursday, 15 August 2019

The great Pacific garbage patch

   

The great Pacific garbage patch


The ocean is full of rubbish and we need to save the world because we do not have another planet to go to. It is so big it’s the size of 3x France's. Really there is 617.800 square miles and tons of animals have been killed from plastic. The great patch was found in 1997. If we keep on adding on to it will keep getting bigger and bigger and the sea life will die. We do not want that. It is making an island and that is really bad






WALT: write a newsletter I have put my information in logical paragraphs. I have used facts I've researched I have proofread my work for errors

4 comments:

  1. Ka rawe Jesse! You clearly put a lot of effort into this and used all your information that you researched. Maybe next time you could add photos to show what you are talking about?

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  2. k i will do that soon

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  3. Hi,Jesse it's Emma
    This was very entertaining to read.
    To be BTB you could maybe add some more punctuation and pictures to make it more interesting.
    Bye

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  4. hi Jesse its dean your work is really cool but maybe next time you could add more punctuation and pics of rubbish and bye bye

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